Hi Madeline Jonathan here from room 11,I see you have been doing PMI and they are VERY good. I liked the personal voice in your writing also the way you presented it was great you had a nice clear voice and didn't murmur or go "ummmm" or "uhhhh"from Jonathan room 11
Dear Maddy,That was a great PMI that you did. We liked how you used expression in it and you had a clear voice.From Jack and Juanita.
WOW Maddy what an interesting PMI .I like how you ended with a smile.
Hi Madeline
ReplyDeleteJonathan here from room 11,
I see you have been doing PMI and they are VERY good. I liked the personal voice in your writing also the way you presented it was great you had a nice clear voice and didn't murmur or go "ummmm" or "uhhhh"
from Jonathan room 11
Dear Maddy,
ReplyDeleteThat was a great PMI that you did. We liked how you used expression in it and you had a clear voice.
From Jack and Juanita.
WOW Maddy what an interesting PMI .I like how you ended with a smile.
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