Thursday, March 11, 2010

Descriptive Writing: I am Zara

I wrote about myself and what I look like, like, and my family. This was the first description that I have written this year. Check out my movie!
By Zara


  1. Wow Zara - if that was your first time at recording and publishing a story you have written then you are very clever! As well as being a fast runner. I enjoyed listening to your story and also seeing your class working hard while you were recording. They seemed to be quiet as mice!
    Well done.

  2. Wow Zara, I didn't know that you could be so interesting. You have a very interesting life I wish that I could have your life. from Kate

  3. wow zara thats a cool movie i like it you
    you used a clear voice
    Ben Room 8