Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Descriptive Writing: Ben's Dad

This is my video about my Dad. It is a description because it has an introduction, characteristics and an evaluation. I am going to email my dad so that he can watch it in Australia.
By Benjamin.


  1. Hi Benjamin, This is a great post. You told us heaps about your dad. He plays guitar, that is so cool and he is lucky that sometimes he works from home. When he watches your post I think he will be very proud of you. Well done.

  2. I'd like to hear that electric guitar Ben! I think you packed a lot of information into your description. I also think you're dad's a lucky guy to have a son like you!

  3. Dear Ben
    Your dad sounds really cool!
    we wish we could have a dad like yours!
    Love the movie and good work.

    From Caleb and Alice in room 16 at grey lynn school

  4. Dear Ben,
    Nice job Ben we loved the movie and we think you have a cool dad, we would love to have a dad, he sounds like a really nice guy.
    from Daniel and Liam in Room 16 at Grey Lynn School

  5. Hi Ben,
    I really liked your movie. Your dad must be really cool [fun].Did you know my Dad is cool like your Dad.

    from Esrah

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