Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Descriptive Writing: I am Elijah

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This is my description about myself. I did an introduction about me, then I said some characteristics about how I look, my family and my hobbies. I finished with an evaluation which is a feeling. Watch my video and leave me a comment.
By Elijah.

2 comments:

  1. Ki ora Room 8 super stars. Wow Elijah you did a good job telling us about your self. You spoke with confidence and we sure that your mum and dad will be very proud of your efforts. Great description and see you on the play ground.

    From Room 16 @ Grey Lynn school

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  2. HI Elijah,

    Room 13 liked your movie all about you, We liked how you presented yourself and described yourself - even skin and eye colour ! It was good how you had a lot of information. Well done.

    Room13

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