Friday, March 5, 2010

Descriptive Writing: I am Toby

We have been working hard on Descriptive Writing this week. Our goal is to remember all the parts of a description and use them in our writing. A piece of descriptive writing must have an introduction, list some characteristics and finish with an evaluation. Check out Toby's recount all about himself and see if you can identify all the parts of a description!


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