Descriptive Writing: Nina's Mum

My mum's name is Allie. I wrote a description about her. I wrote what she looks like, what her job is and what her hobbies are. Watch my video and see what you learn about my mum.

By Nina.

Descriptive Writing: Charlotte's Mum

My mum's name is Angela. Here is my description of her. I like my mum because she is funny. I hope that you like her too!

By Charlotte.

Descriptive Writing: James' Mum

This is a video about my mum. I wrote a description of her in my writing book and then I filmed it on the computer. Thank you for watching!

By James.

Puriri Swimming Sports 2010

On Friday, the whole Puriri team had swimming sports at our school pool. Lots of parents came to watch us, which was very exciting and cool. We all got to have a race and we did our best. Room 8 really enjoyed swimming sports. Check out our movie to watch us in action!

Descriptive Writing: Kate's Mum

This is my writing about my Mum. This tells you everything about her life that you need to know. I hope you enjoy this video.

By Kate.

Descriptive Writing: Ben's Dad

This is my video about my Dad. It is a description because it has an introduction, characteristics and an evaluation. I am going to email my dad so that he can watch it in Australia.

By Benjamin.

Descriptive Writing: Isobel's Mum

I wrote a description about my mum. I filmed myself on Photo Booth with a little help from James. I hope that you enjoy it!

By Isobel.

Descriptive Writing: I am Zara

I wrote about myself and what I look like, like, and my family. This was the first description that I have written this year. Check out my movie!

By Zara

Descriptive Writing: I am Elijah

This is my description about myself. I did an introduction about me, then I said some characteristics about how I look, my family and my hobbies. I finished with an evaluation which is a feeling. Watch my video and leave me a comment.

By Elijah.

Descriptive Writing: I am Madeleine

This is my video telling you all about me. I made it by filming myself in Photo Booth. I had to read what I had written in my book and look at the camera at the same time. It was pretty hard. I hope you enjoy watching the video!

By Madeleine.

Descriptive Writing: I am Maya

Here is Maya to tell you all about herself. She is using the structure of a description perfectly!

Descriptive Writing: I am Toby

We have been working hard on Descriptive Writing this week. Our goal is to remember all the parts of a description and use them in our writing. A piece of descriptive writing must have an introduction, list some characteristics and finish with an evaluation. Check out Toby's recount all about himself and see if you can identify all the parts of a description!