Hi Jeru and Caitlin, What a great retell of this story. I do hope this story was fiction, otherwise there would be real trouble. What did you think?Mrs Burt
Hi Caitlin and Jeru, har har harhee hee heeI'm sure glad that bear was not me!Fact or fiction I cannot tellyou both retold the storyso very well,but I'll be extra carefulnext time when I playin the sandpit, so thank youReading Group A.
Hi Caitlin and Jeru, we really like your fictional story and how you retold it, because the bear is supposed to eat the girl but the girl wants to eat the bear! From Amy and Phoenix
Hi Jeru and Caitlin, we think the story is fiction because bears don't wear clothes and the girl would get eaten. From Jaime and Sasha.
Hi Jeru and Caitlin, great story telling, I can't believe the bear was a friend! Don't you think that's a great story? I think it's not true because people don't scare bears. From Xavier and Anisah
I love it! Very creative!That's actually really cool.謝謝你的文章分享,請你有空到我馬城界隨意部落格參觀,Thanks