The CastleOnce upon a time there lived a Prince called Edmund. He was on a quest for his father to find a special castle made entirely of metal. He walked for hours and hours until he came to a steep hill. He walked up the steep hill, his cloak swinging side to side and his gold hair swirling in the breeze. Finally he was at the castle. His blue eyes popped out like they were going to explode from his head when he saw a beautiful princess in the doorway. She had long blonde hair and a purple dress. Her eyes were the colour of the sky. Her name was Sophie.
Sophie saw the Prince walk up to her castle...
Hi James and Zara,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyd reading your orientation. You used heaps of adjectives and I could really picture Edmund walking up the hill. Great writing. I can't wait to read more!
Ruth in Room 11
Hi guys,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great orientation!
You described the characters brilliantly. Keep up the awesome work guys!
From Jonathan room 11