Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Report Writing: Sharks are fish!

For report writing this week, have been focusing on making sure all the words we use are factual and that we don't use words like 'you,' 'I', and 'we.' We are also learning to have an introduction at the start, bundles of facts in the middle and a conclusion at the end. Maia has written a fantastic report about sharks, and together with Jaime they made a movie using the report as a script. See if you can hear the three parts of a report in the movie!


  1. Hi Maia & Jaime
    I think you did a good job of this report. It contains great information and is well constructed.
    Your voice over is clear and well articulated.
    Well done.

  2. Thank you for that reassuring information Maia and Jaime. It will be good to know if I meet a shark that it won't eat me, it will only bite me :) This was a fun way to share your report.
    Mrs Burt

  3. What great facts about sharks! I'm glad you presented your report in this cool format because some people prefer to learn by listening instead of reading. Well done guys.

  4. I loved the way you presented your facts Maia and Jamie. I have learnt so much information about sharks. Keep up the good work

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